Tuesday, January 12, 2021

Critical Reflection

 1.• How do your products represent social groups or issues?

Our movie is a coming of age movie about lesbianism, coming out and discovering yourself. Our movie represents a lot of people's actual coming out stories. For example, Rose's mom does not know that she likes women or even has a girlfriend before she decides to go looking through her phone. A lot of coming out stories are actually similar to roses in the way that their parents are homophobic and kick them out of the house knowing they have nowhere to go. Our film also represents black women who like women, most of the representation black women who like women usually get is not good. Most black representation in the media is usually involving gang violence or something depressing, or an interracial couple. We just felt that we needed to show that black lesbians and LGBTQ+ people exist and they don’t all have to have a sad story. Even though we did make the story quite sad, we tried to make it a point that no matter what happened Rose would always have someone by her side no matter what happened. In the movie even when her mom doesn’t want her anymore she knows that she can go to Carmen. Our movie also represents a huge elephant in the room which is homophobia, a lot of people relay homophobia to the fact that they are Christian, which I’ve seen used as an excuse so many times which is super upsetting.  We also used actual teens, most teen films nowadays are made for teens but are not relatable for them or just do not represent them in any way, a lot of them also use adults to portray children rather than just having greens, which leads to teens to not getting a lot of content that is actually relatable for them.



2. How do the elements of your production work together to create a sense of ‘branding’?

Our production team tried to make our movie have a certain color that you could identify it by, we chose yellow and like kind of mellow colors. There are a lot of greens and pinks and purples in small details of the movie. For example, Rose's bracelet is purple and blue with a little bit of pink, whereas Carmens is pink and green. We wanted to focus on small details because they can also make or break  a film. For example it is not said in the film, but after Carmen gives Rose the bracelet she made, Rose makes her one too and both their bracelets have corresponding hearts, where it says C loves R or R loves C. We also wanted to add aspects of ourselves into the branding and show how involved we were in our movie, and how much effort we put into it. For example, I painted our postcard and my partner edited it, a cool thing is that I can not really draw faces so I usually choose to leave them out, so I sent it to my partner without mentioning the fact that I am not that good at drawing faces and she suggested I do not put faces so she can put the titles across their faces, which i thought was a great idea. Another detail in the painting is that I did not include below the arms so we could not include their bracelets so I changed them to necklaces, but with Rose and Carmen both having extremely similar ones, with Carmens having a few more white details. I also based their hairstyles off of some of the scenes. For example, in Carmens first and last scene she has her hair in a bun with her bangs in her face, which is shown on the front of our postcard. For Rose I based it off the scene where she is blow drying her hair, because I have her wearing a blue shirt and that's the only time she wears a blue shirt, so I decided to make her have her hair down.


3 How do your products engage with the audience?

Our target audience is members of the lgbt community, specifically people of color, or those who feel under represented. We are trying to show our audience that even if they are not out of the closet or do not feel comfortable doing so any time soon, that there will always be someone there for them. We wanted to show that no matter what happens someone will always be there to “pick up the pieces” and put you back together. We wanted to represent actual relationships that happen. We also wanted to show different types of relationships which is why we wanted to sort of try to show the relationship between Rose and her mom and explain why she was shocked when her mom told her to leave. A lot of people say they are not homophobic and that they are okay with lgbt people until its someone close to themor they will be out right homophobic to thers while having lgbt family memebers, which is extremely damaging to a persons mental health. I know a lot of people who have been kicked out of their homes by their parents and after that they feel like there is nothing left and no one to help them.



4 How did your research inform your products and the way they use or challenge conventions?

For our research we watched  a lot of films with women who like women as lead characters. One of the things we noticed is that they did not really do anything besides their sexuality, like they barely had developed personalities. Another thing was that the “love interest” would usually be in a relationship with a boy and the main character would get upset. We found examples of that in the film “booksmart” when Amy is crushing on Ryan but she finds Ryan kissing a boy at a party. We tried to “challenge” conventions by making her liking women just a piece of her story and not the whole thing. For example the story would still make sense had you not known Rose like women and was in a relationship with one, like she could still get kicked out but the watcher would only figure out why when her mom says it, which is why that scene is so important.


Short Film Package





 My short film package 

Elle et Elle

https://youtu.be/iw-Kzli6WAU


website:https://khiaraandnagual.wixsite.com/elletelleshortfilm


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Thursday, January 7, 2021

re edit: do the jokey pokey then you turn around

 Okay so we’re back and today we re edit to add our newest clips in. Re edits and reshoots are my favorite because they don’t take as long as the first time.  For example today it only took us like thirty minutes to edit, rather than the previous couple hours it took the first time. We had less clips to choose from this time which was good because we didn’t have as much time today as we did the past few times because I had to do something with my mom. So I had to leave pretty early so we only had 2 hours.  This time instead of watching baking shows we watched the movie clueless, which is such a good movie, and it’s on of my favorites. 



Reshoot: hey we’re filming here🧍🏾‍♀️

Hi guys welcome back, it’s been a pretty long break, Happy new year! Today we started reshooting, reshooting is something that needs to be done to redo scenes just in case something is wrong or looked bad. Reshooting is very important so that our movie can be seamless and have as few mess ups and mistakes as possible. It’s good to have at least one reshoot and since we only have time for one reshoot, we’re going to only do one and try and fit it all today. We just finished reshooting, we didn’t get as much done as we wanted but what we have so far is fine. We reshot most of my bedroom scenes of when “rose” was alone, because I didn’t like how my hair looked. Except my partner kept getting mad because I kept saying I don’t like it, which was wasting time and she had to go home soon. We didn’t get as much done as we hoped but we completed almost half of our list which was pretty good. We mostly had to re edit, which we will be doing tomorrow. 



Saturday, December 26, 2020

Editing: the sequel


 We editited today because I couldn’t edit yesterday, because it’s my sisters birthday, she’s turning 19. I saved nagual some cake it was chocolate cake with chocolate frosting. And we had to run around town to find her cake because it was Christmas Eve and most stores closed at 6pm. Me and nagual editied over zoom and she shared her screen with me so taht I could have input too. We figured out where to put the songs and which scenes the songs went best with. We also cut some clips in half and placed them in different places just to experiment. We also had to edit in my voice in to some scenes, which was pretty cool because I had to film the voiceovers over zoom. 

Friday, December 25, 2020

Editing: baking shows


 We finally started editing today, there wasn’t that much to edit since I only sent nagual the final ones not every single one we filmed. The only difficult pet for today was deciding which Billie eilish song we wanted to use and where we were going to put it. We were thinking that maybe we could just split it up into different parts of the movie. Or maybe we could use multiple songs, because there are a lot that would be good for our film, because Billie eilish makes really chill/slow mellow music. So she’s a good singer to have in a coming of age movie, especially since she is close to our age. While we were editing we watched new baking shows on Netflix, I love baking shows they’re just so cute watch and fun especially the ones with people who can’t really bake. And also before I forget merry Christmas!!

Thursday, December 24, 2020

Filming: day 2 switcheroo

 We started filming, and decided to change a lot of stuff. Since it was like the middle of the night we couldn’t take the bus. So we decided to just film in my moms car because it was the only place available. Which does sort of change the narrative. We also decided to film my moms scenes with just her in the room, and me fill in with my voice later. We also changed some of the lines because some of them didn’t make sense in the places that they were. Our storyboard was extremely helpful but we did end up changing most of the camera angles because I couldn’t figure out how to get our phones to attach to the ceiling. We also had so many outtakes when me and micheka filmed our scenes and I literally used most of my storage.



Tuesday, December 22, 2020

Filming, back on track!


 So after the fiasco of my friends not being able to film, I had to think fast and find replacements. My moms friends daughter said she could help and so did my mom. Which was really good. I was originally going to try and play my mom. My friend can’t film today so she’s gonna come another day. But we’re gonna film my moms scenes today. We filmed them but we had to refilm a lot of times because we kept making her laugh. She also kept forgetting her lines, which I have no idea why because her lines were not that hard. My mom thinks she’s a good actress but she has proved otherwise. She also decided to do her hair and makeup and I was like ma’am it’s not that serious. But I guess she wanted to look good for her movie debut.

Monday, December 21, 2020

Filming fiasco

 So today me and nagual decided to start filming since we finally had all the supplies. Earlier we had decided to play the characters ourselves but we later decided to just our friends to do it, like we originally planned. So this morning I was was already to start filming like we had planned. And I asked my friends if they were still coming, and they all said no. None of them had asked their parents! So I was literally so angry. We had had this plan for so freaking long. They knew how important this was to me, because I kept telling them again and again. We literally spoke about it last night and they all said yeah. It just makes me so upset that they said they could come and they never even asked, because my time has just been wasted. I still have a few days to film but I wanted to get it done today so that it would be easier especially with more people.





Saturday, December 19, 2020

Making a movie: shopping!!

 Hey guys! Okay so today I’m going to go shopping for props because I thought I had them but I don’t. All I really need is a box and tripod, and a necklace. My mom said I can use her tripod and I think I’m going to make matching bracelets for rose and Carmen. But I’m gonna use an old necklace as the one Carmen gives rose. I think I’m just going to buy a box from dollar tree, because they have this new thing called craft corner with a ton of arts and crafts stuff. They have a lot of little treasure chests/ jewelry boxes so I’m gonna use one of those and just paint it to look nice. Speaking of painting, I actually made a clay mushroom it’s not the best but it’s so cute. And it’s sitting on my dresser table right now, when I get more clay I’m going to make more. I haven’t worked with clay in so long and I didn’t realise how hard of a medium to work with, I definitely like paint and canvases more. 





Making a movie: decisions


 So, my partner, Nagual and I have made the executive decision to play the roles ourselves. Because we decided taht would be easier than getting more people together. Especially during a pandemic with Florida having a lot of cases. I was looking at the news today and I think taht LA has the most cases. I wish we would just go into a tier 4 look some countries are. Because there’s no reasons for schools and work to be open right now. It should only be grocery stores and even those shouldn’t really be open. I’ve also so many people complain about masks and honestly I find it crazy because everytime I look bad you can only see half my face, which I think is a win. I don’t know why so many people don’t like it. I just hope that when Joe Biden becomes president he shuts the country down, because we need to get rid of the virus like other countries have. I don’t think people should make this “the new normal” like 2,000,000 people dying in 8 months isn’t normal it’s sad.

Friday, December 18, 2020

Making a movie: song rights!


 I got my first response for song rights last week! I ended messaging Billie Eilishs manager and asked him if I could use some of her music. He was extremely polite and just asked if it would be for public or private use. I explained to him that it was a school film that would be posted online, but if he was still unsure I could send him the script. At first I was a little confused on what he meant by public or private, and whether or not our film fell under each category. So I emailed my teacher and he told me what to say. So I sent him what my teacher said and he still said it was fine. So that was really exciting!

Monday, November 30, 2020

Making a movie: reserving the rights

 For our short film we want to have music in the background. But for us to be able use music from artists we will need their permission. I have been emailing artists and their managers for a while now, but nothing has come from it. So recently I just decided that maybe I would be better off messaging them on instagram. I just decided to use artists from my playlist and messaged them, about our film and asked if we would be able to use any of their songs. Sadly none of them have gotten back to us yet. I am mostly hoping for a response from Kali Uchis and Clairo because I really love their music, and I feel like it really fits with the film. I was really hoping to be able to get Billie Eilish music in our film because her song "my future" has the perfect vibes for our film. I think I might try twitter messages next and hopefully some more emails. I am quite upset that they do not check their emails very often, because this is really important to me, but I cant really be upset because they are extremely busy and probably get millions of messages a day. 


(footage of me when I realise im probably not getting a response)


Friday, November 20, 2020

Marketing: Social Media style!

 For the website we decided to make a new email, so everything for the film was under one umbrella. We then went ahead and started making social medias, so we could link them to our website. First we made our youtube account, where we will be posting behind the scenes videos. We decided to also vlog our fiming process so that people can watch and see what it is like to create a student short film. I am so excited to start filming so that we can vlog it. I think it will feel more exciting to watch the film, if you are also apart of the filming process. Next we made our instagram account, we folowed all of our other friends who are making films and ourselves, and the same with our twitter. Our instagram and twitter wont be as exciting as our youtube but we will try and make it as active as we possibly can. I think our facebook can be more active, with us posting our schedule and things,.


 







Thursday, November 19, 2020

maeketing: making our website!

 This week we started making our website! We fisrt had to choose a name for the film, because we had yet to choose one. At first we had thought about the name Carmen, because Carmen is a big part of the story. But then Nagual thought about the name her and her, but I did not really like that. So I was like ooh what if we make it her and her, but in a different language so it sounds better. We chose to make it in french because its the language of love. Then we went on wix.com and chose a template. We went through the film templates and chose which one we liked best. We chose a cute one with a deer, and a pink and mint green theme. Then we customised the themes and edited all of  the preset stuff. We chose a yellow and pink theme. Then once we were done we sent the link to a few friends and let them decide if they liked it, and they all said they did!



Sunday, November 15, 2020

storyboard for short film



Storyboarding for this film was a lot harder than any of the other projects we have had to storyboard for. It was a lot of drawing involved, and having to refer back to the script to make sure they were exactly the same. We got a lot of scenes wrong. Like we had to keep stopping and erasing, because we had messed up some of the boxes. For example for the scene where Roses mom finds out, I had written that she found out from a note. But then once checking the script I realised she finds out by reading messages, so i had to change that. The worst part was having to keep referring back to the screenplay and having to make everything the same. It was also hard to remember the difference in lengths, because for the screenplay each page is 1 minute of screen time but for the storyboard each page is 30 seconds. So it was a little hard to stretch the pages for the storyboard, because it was mostly dialogue. I think the storyboard will make filming a lot more difficult, because it will be hard to get it exactly like how we drew it out. I think its going to be hard to get the angles we want, like the aerial. I think were probably gonna stand on a high surface then film that way. 

Monday, November 9, 2020

Plans for movie


 Schedule: 

10-3-2020: screenplay finished

11-9-2020: storyboard begins

11-12 -> 11-20-2020: casting

11-23 -> 11-27-2020: begin filming

12-21 -> 12-31-2020: finish filming

1-1 -> 1-3-2021: finalize editing


Location: 

-Train station

-Bus stop

-Bus

-Participants houses(TBA)


 Participants:

-Khiara

-Nagual

-Actors(TBA)


Props: 

-Bags

-Clothes

-Phones 

-Headphones

-Jewelry


Costumes:

-Casual clothing

-Maybe some nightwear.


Health and Safety: There will be parental supervision whenever it is possible.Taking corona virus into consideration we will have all participants tested and ensure the wearing of masks and sanitizing to keep everyone safe.We will also keep a first aid kit handy.

Friday, October 16, 2020

Short film vs feature length film

I finished watching both films, and now I will be comparing the two. I personally preferred the full length feature film better, because I feel like it was easier to follow than the short film. I wrote about how the short film was kind of silent and hard to follow, if you were not paying attention. The full length also introduced us to more of characters than the short did. One of the characters we got introduced to was number one, he was one of my favorites, he was adorable. We also found out what they actually were, they were hand made dolls that are operated by mechanics. I really enjoyed his character arc, in the beginning he was a scaredy cat and was extremely fearful, but at the end he sacrificed himself to save the rest. We were also introduced to more of the machines than just the cat beast. The full length also had a way more decipherable plot, which made it easier to follow than the short. The short was also quite good, and I would recommend watching it for back plot. The short was definitely a little more confusing than the full length and had less development. I am quite happy that it got turned into a full length, because it was a lot more fun and better to watch. also the full length was more like WALL-E than the short, which made it even more enjoyable, to have something to compare it to




Research 9, the feature film

The full length film was amazing, and enjoyable. This film had so many great twists and turns, and they were really unexpected. Every time I thought it was going to end, or a scene was going to chang to something boring, something exciting would happen and peek my interest again. When the ninth doll woke up he did not really know what was going on. So he decided to explore and find out what was going on, he found out there were actually others like him. They told him everything that had happened, and said that they were hiding from machinery that was out to get them. Despite being the youngest nine kept trying to convince the others to stand up for themselves and stop hiding from the machines and end their reign of terror. They ended up defeating the machines and freed the other numbers as their "happy ending". The movie had a lot of great character development, one of my favorites was number ones development. In the beginning he was a hardheaded scaredy cat and very fearful, but in the end he sacrificed himself for the others, so that they would survive. Another one was number seven who was fearless and never stopped trying to defeat the machines, but sadly after a while she started to give up. The whole thing was fun and jampacked, it was sort of like an animated action film. We find out the only "people" left are the machines and dolls, in a post-apoclyptic setting. It also looked a lot more professional and well done than the short film, and you can definitely tell they spent their time on it.

research 9, the short

 Today we watched the short film 9, the plot was quite confusing. I thoroughly enjoyed the animation style. It reminded me of the Disney film 'toy story' but if maybe someone like Tim Burton had written it. It reminds me of toy story because there was a robot cat kind of thing, that reminded me of one of characters toys which was a baby head on a spider robot body. It also reminded me a little bit of another Disney movie called 'Wall-E', because of the animation style. It also reminded me of Wall-E  because of the fact that in the beginning they were a trash pile, from what it looked like. The characters were very cute, they looked like little burlap sack dolls, or burlap sack minions, because of their eyes. The lighting used was mostly dark and eerie, and there was very little speech. The lighting was almost like they were in a dust storm, because of the clouds. The main protagonist is one of the burlap sack dolls who is called '9' and he is who the whole film was about. One of the main antagonists was the cat that I mentioned earlier, which also seemed to be a cats skull on robot spider legs. Which also added to the fact that it reminded me of Tim burtons style. The plot was quite hard to decipher, because there was not much speech, which made it hard to tell what was going on. So you have to pay really close attention, but once you start paying attention you're immediately hooked because the characters are so cute. They're like little trash dolls, but with personality and professionally made.